So I wrote this poem, and I'm not sure puncture? please help?
This world is Heaven not our permanent home, we have a better home beyond the sky A place where there is no misunderstanding When the river of life is not taking place A dry land ever joy, peace and the wonderful light, where love abides and there is no night A city with streets paved with gold where, with the redeemed we live I am told that the angels are singing sweet, Sweet chords from their gold harps are ringing a place without pain, pain, disease or death where the charming roses bloom forever We'll see Jesus, O praise his name dear to all eternity, we will prevail with him throughout the ages of his grace, we proclaim Like I am clueless and let me know what you think? Let me know if you like the poem. I worked very hard for her. by the way it Iambic Pentameter (has 10 syllables per line)
You should do some reading on counters in general and iambic pentameter about in particular. There is much information available online. Ten syllables per line is not what language is free. There must be a regular pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables. Line 2 is the only line of iambic pentameter in your poem.
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